Like
Brooke, I was very much struck in this section by the repeated characterization
of nature (in Brooke’s post, specifically water) as poisonous to humans. This is a theme repeated with a difference
from Traill’s work, as Traill is concerned with the healing or poisonous
properties of plants. In our discussion
of Traill, we talked about how she (mainly) characterizes plants as curative
and humans as sickly. I think Austin does
something different here, as she describes a “sickly” nature.
Austin
suggests repeatedly that nature itself is sick, in ways that blur the
difference between the human body and the natural world. She uses the word “sickly” twice, describing
both earth (“soil sickly with alkali-collecting pools”) and water (“sickly,
slow streams”) (92). Less obvious word
choices also serve to characterize nature as sickly. She refers, for instance, to “wastes” of
reeds. “Wastes” can be read as a
geographic term signifying an empty expanse (Melville uses it to describe the
ocean, for instance), but also suggests the “wasting away” characteristic of
tuberculosis. In the same vein, she
repeats imagery of being bleached – a “faded white” heliotrope and “ghostly
pale” reeds – creating the image of a nature which has wasted like an invalid’s
face. She describes stalks as “succumb[ing],”
as after a long illness, says pools of water are “evil-smelling like old blood,”
and describes the “leakage” from canals – the water, here, is like the pus from
an infected wound (92).
This
view of a sick nature is one which is decidedly less useful to humans than
those articulated by Audubon, Cooper, Traill, Melville, etc. These authors all depict a nature which is in
some way harvestable by humans: Audubon and Melville both describe the “harvesting”
of animals, while Cooper and Traill “glean” nature for plant specimens. The nature depicted by Austin in this passage
(with the exception of the healing heliotrope) is decidedly un-harvestable. It is, rather, a nature which is sick, and
capable of making humans who wish to better understand it sick (malaria could be
the consequence of exploring the tulares, for instance.)
The
question is, what made nature sick? If
this is a proto-environmentalist text, then the answer seems to be the
poisonous run-off from agriculture in the West (and Brooke’s reading of water
as pharmakon supports this.) But could
there be other causes for nature’s sickness, or could sickness be the natural
state of the “land of little rain”?
Perhaps
unconnectedly, I think the point Sam made in class about Austin’s opaque style
is suggestive here. Nature is sick, and
Austin’s difficult sentences are a diagnosis painfully described. Unlike Cooper, though, or Traill (to some
extent), we don’t see long moralistic asides about the ideal human relationship
to the environment in Austin’s work. Rather,
Austin seems content to diagnose nature as sickly and refrains from
recommending a cure – perhaps indicative of her overall attitude toward
human-environment interactions.
Wonderful--a "diagnosis painfully described." Is it possible that the entire passage is meant to show the absurdity of such human categories? What for us is sickly offers shelter to the red-winged blackbirds (a particularly aggressive species) and a nesting-ground for waterfowl--a last refuge, a last opportunity for privacy for these birds, which is why we should only "mean" to explore them but aren't really meant to do it. Ever.
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